The Rain Lullaby

This is a song I actually wrote in a lucid dream :wacko: I was 20 years older, and was a dad: my daughter stared out the window, where it was raining outside. She looked at me and said, "Daddy, play that song on your piano you always play when it rains." And I did! When I woke up, I found I remembered what the notes were! Any thoughts?

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I would suggest trying diiffrent rhythms as this would make the piece interesting.The piano is playing the chord notes for the whole piece,something interesting could be added.I like the piece as it is slow moving and not too much movement and very calm piece of music.relaxing

First:

OH NOEZ, A DREAM OF HAVING KIDS!!!!

Just kidding.

Second:

A very nice, tranquil piece.

I'm curious to what this sounds like without so much of a Piano/and later Harpsichord "metronome" (chord progression) going on in the background, perhaps, make it ever so slightly simpler, like cut out a note or two... lol?

But it makes sense to do the "metronome" at the "double-time" (I think).