A little WIP piece

Hi Gang-

I just wanted to share with you all a little piece I'm currently working on. It still has a fair amount of work left to be done on it, mainly with tweaking the mixing and working on humanizing and realism in the MIDI. Anyway, I thought I'd just post it to see what you guys think of it thus far.

I haven't thought of a name for it yet.

10_31a.mp3 - File Shared from Box.net - Free Online File Storage

Enjoy!

Hi Gang-

I just wanted to share with you all a little piece I'm currently working on. It still has a fair amount of work left to be done on it, mainly with tweaking the mixing and working on humanizing and realism in the MIDI. Anyway, I thought I'd just post it to see what you guys think of it thus far.

I haven't thought of a name for it yet.

10_31a.mp3 - File Shared from Box.net - Free Online File Storage

Enjoy!

Andy, I think this piece needs more energy. The instruments sounds synthetic for my ear.. You should try to make it with other libraries and try to use more dynamics. And the critism is: I don't hear any general melody in this piece? ? ? Where is it? I hear just harmony. Maybe you should try to compose it? The idea is very interesting, but you should work more on it. Waiting when you'll finish it! :) If you don't like my critism, sorry for that - it just my opinion! Keep it up!

You need to teach me how to compose like you do . lol

Sounds like an army is mobilizing or a space brigade or something like that to me.

Sounds good.

Andy

I love Orchestral Bells, so I loved the opening of this one.

Is that Omnisphere in there?

Since you said that there is still work to be done on the piece, I won't say what I don't like about it as of now (although there isn't much to be said).

Nice work.

Ron