Star Force for Brass Choir

Seemed hesitant! I never noticed, thank you for pointing that out! And yes, I'm a horn player, I know what I'm asking for there. :)

In the introduction, it feels a bit clumsy to have an entrance every four beats. It might be nice to overlap entrances of the opening motif.

There's a lot of time that I feel like I'm waiting on something, such as in measures 20-21. The thing we've been listening to is holding and then nothing else pops up. It might be nice to add some sore of echo effect? or perhaps a call and response? or...something? or....nothing at all and leave it how it is? These are just thoughts....

Measure 32 sounds like it should be an arrival point, but I don't get the 'arrival' part as well. It kind of pops up out of nowhere, and I don't see a lot of visual indications that we're leading up to it.

It might be nice to have some moments without the tuba. I feel like we might get tired of hearing the tuba holding down the bottom the whole time.

I like the call and response between the trumpets and horns at measure 120. It happened earlier too.

Performance wise, I feel like asking for that high D at the end out of nowhere is extremely risky.

Hope that helped. Sorry some of it is 'negative', but hopefully it is constructive.