December 24, 200916 yr I think this is pretty good: interesting rhythms, sound effects (such as the noise going from one side to the other) make for good club dance, and I think you succeeded at what you were trying to do You might want to think about making an actual melody though to further improve what you already have here: Cyndi Lauper's "Nightlife" is a prime example of mixing melody and rhythm to get one of the most played dance club tracks ever
January 28, 201016 yr Yes is good, The initial bass motif C,c,c,c,Eb,D,C could be sent a little more to the back using reverb or delay, Some splash cymbals are too loud, at 1:38 That type of harmony is always good, but you could modulate from C minor to E minor maybe, try my moving everything just like that, to E minor, you'll see, after changing adding a new element would sound good, (a new cymbal or another thingy) At 4:10 be careful with the low frequecies, the Bass and mainly the Kick, ... don't kick the kick too much, most audio systems have bass boost that will make it sound good, that kick at the end I think is a bit loud.
January 30, 201016 yr Author Thanks for the advice guys, ill much around wif it and c what i can come up wif
