(stars of the night) -njoum il liyl -

well I've started interpreting this piece (I've herd it in a movie) and I'm trying to write it in a "melodic metal" spirit ... but I'm having a bit of a trouble with the precautions part , and may be make it a bit longer ... if any one is interested in helping me ...

this is a XML version

or

a guitarPro version

you may change anything you like ;)

you may change anything you like ;)

Hey. took a look at your GP5 file. hated it...your main theme was annoying as hell in my opinion, had no originality, was totally predictable, uninteresting and generally not very good. plus it was notated all wrong, you're missing an anacrusis in there and i dont know what you were trying to do with the tracks second voice.. and why copy and paste the entire guitar line into the violin?? why do you even have a violin in there?? nothing makes any sense. is this your first time using guitar pro by any chance? nothing about the score struck me as being anything noteworthy, sorry man.

So i added into your theme for you some drums and a proper bass line. And got a bit carried away after that, became a bit nostalgic as i havent used GP5 in a long long time. So I gave you a "B" section. Hope you enjoy!

-SS

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apparently you don't get the idea! it's a piece for an "ORIANTAL" competition...

means:

the jury is composed from 4 old guys trapped in the 60's so any thing that is bit more "rhythmic" won't work !

these old dogs have to see and hear a violin ensemble .. (and at the time I posted it online I didn't figure out what they are supposed to be doing exactly...)

by precautions I was referring to "oriantal" instruments such as "tar" or "darbouka"...

well it's much better now (I'll post it as soon as I have it written in GuitarPro format ..It's on paper now) ...