vision (FL Studio experiment)

..that's my 1st attempt to compose a music with FL Studio

vision (FL Studio experiment)

I like it! I love the piano and synth. It would be cool if the beat changed up a bit. I love how the synth follows the piano when it comes in. I love the bass around 2:10. It would be cool to change the key somewhere in there. Nice use of effects and L to R fading at the end.

Welcome to YC,

Hey that's your frist time on FL Studio ?, sounds really good,

The piano is always good, the bass is veeery good, is it the BooBass ? At 2:50 sounds like is getting too loud and the limiter is saving from click, perhaps you should check the low frequency sounds.

The structure is ok, the harmony a little classical but is ok too,. The ending is ok in harmony but the beat is cutted in a little drastic way, I feel the first tempo of next bar is needed, with a final crash-cymbal maybe.

When modulating you could use a less similar keys because the Em-Bm does not create a clear change, sounds like is plane, maybe Em-Cm or Em-Gm... anyway... is good.

thank you for your comments. They are useful to me.

..yes it was first time on FL Studio...and BooBass is used

I'm amateur musician and I do it just at leisure as my hobby so I know that my samples are not perfect... I'm curious about other musician's opinions and that's the reason I'm here on YC

Sounds pretty good! I like the use of the extra sound effects in here a lot.

The piano was on point!

Beautiful. The only problem is the piano going out of time every now and then.