one day (3rd FL Studio experiment)

...my 3rd experiment with FL Studio

one day (3rd FL Studio experiment)

The main idea is good, kinda mixed of classical harmonies with pop/dance elements.

The guitar is very good, (the slayer) if your list of effects appears "Hardcore" use it, is a box with several pedals, is very good to combine with the slayer.

For the drums (if you have it) use te "FPC"...

I think your intention was to create some "real" drumset, to give more realistic sound you have to create more than 1 pattern that is looping, create several with the same beat but with tiny different velocities that helps to create something closed to the human playing, because is very common that the problem with the drums is that they are too perfect, no one plays the drums as perfect as a synth, remove the prefect aspects and your drumset will sound better.

There is a speed change at the begining, is that ok ?

I suggest you to start using the "sytrus" is very complex (6 Osc's) but you can just load one of the many created presets, it will use more Ram and processor but you can set a biger buffer...

The Bass is a bit weak, you can set it louder.

What version of FL Studio are you using ? (I might be suggesting you plugins you don't have)

The Reverb in the Master track on mixerat 3:06 is a very good resource, you can use the "Love Philter" for crazier effects.

The ending could be better if you prepare it with an easy cadence, if you're using Cm, Ab, Fm, G, do something like Cm, Ab, Fm, Ab, G, Cm.....