July 16, 201016 yr Love the very beginning. Cool 5/4 feel... and ironically I use that I vi IV chord progression in B all the time when I improvise on piano. :happy: nice choice! personally, I hear the first beat of measure 30 (key of Ab) as a PICK UP and then beat one actually occuring on beat two... just my opinion. I don't know how you hear it, but that's what my ear tells me. I will jump on the bandwagon and say that m38 gets muddy, and an easy fix is a)bring it up the octave or b) use open instead of closed chords. Really nice ending... aside from the fact that there are some minor fixes, and it is apparent in some transitions that this was loosely put together... but you acknowledge that. All around really nice. .....the 5/4 makes me think of stars... mission accomplished my friend....
