March 4, 201016 yr I really like it! Good use of timpani as well. My only thing to say is that the motif seems a bit repetitive in a few sections, but nothing major!
March 4, 201016 yr very good atmosphere! it got anticipation all over, after 40 seconds i would develop some more stuff, enter some melody there that will hint for the coming, because on its own it becomes repetitive after the middle, you've got two motives going on- the cool brass thing and the rhythmic violins. to my ear it should be connected somehow and not repeated again, or even switched-the brass take the violin part, and the violins the brass one..in short, just abit more development
March 5, 201016 yr I like the idea - a good dramatic intro. I was anticipating a change or development to the motif, but it didn't happen! A real shame as I thought it showed great promise. Perhaps you should consider developing it a bit more. Good work though!