March 27, 201016 yr Author I´m sorry but the upload doesn´t work. Here´s an external link: http://www.box.net/shared/x7lutyv7ey
March 27, 201016 yr You can just edit your previous upload and select "Reupload media" to try the audio file again if it failed the first time. ;)
March 29, 201016 yr Lovely piece :) The score is a bit sloppy in the beginning (the stem directions), easy fix though. Nice work :thumbsup:
March 29, 201016 yr Very nice work! I thought it was really whimsical and fantasia-like! I would put more repeats in, as I don't think there is a theme or direction to the work, but on the whole, great! 8/10!
March 30, 201016 yr I like the sound of this one. It's not anything too complex, and it stays in a happy mood for its short duration, which is pleasant and very fun. I'd just like to comment on your left-hand accompaniement. I get the felling you were going for something more waltz-like, which would mean a more common bass -chord - chord pattern. Your use of thitds in the left hand's (relatively) lower register (near the bottom of the staff) seems also questionable to me, for something as light and happy as the rest of the piece. Good work overall. :phones:
March 30, 201016 yr Author Hey, thanx for the Comments. I will think more about your critics, if i have the time to. The "Walzer-feeling" should really just be in one part. I tried to made it not to easy, propably thats the reason for the Bass.
