April 19, 201015 yr A song commissioned and dedicated to my friend, Marie-Claire Stone. Enjoy! Marie-Claire
April 21, 201015 yr Hey mate, First off, for future reference could you upload a .pdf score? not all people viewing this would have siblius. The piece it self; it's ok. You apear to have one theme and a coda.. that's it. The one you start with you add some variations to it but it's still generally the same and then the coda it self seems to heavily stem from the main theme again. One thing that I did like was what you actually did as a variation. Most people might just add some ornaments or scale runs, but you've changed the harmony of the melody - good work imo. Again, I'd love to have a score to look at so I can give reference to specific bar numbers. Cheers for uploading.
