Unfinished Piece

This is a piece I started not too long ago. I know it's not great, and there are a few spots that need working on. I'd appreciate any advice, and maybe a bit of help with finishing it.

Thanks in advance.

Vessel.mid

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I'd add a harp, subtle but rhytmic more dense than anything else, just to mark harmony and keep fine mood.

When the first part culminate, I'd involve something totaly new, much more serene, open and vivid.

After that... I'd see. It can be ABA, ABCBA, one fantasy or something other.

So much for tips.

Fine material btw.

Well I don't know what you're so afraid of miss, but this is fine work.

I'd agree adding more instrumentation will give it a more dramatic effect.

I'm no orchestrator but if people tell you u're a cliche just take the time to listen to some of the work on here and u'll realise alot if it is just reconstituted stuff. A kind of subconscious, deceptive, compositional reportoire that masquarades as ones original work merely because it makes the composer feel good.

Well enough of my rant. Just keep going I guess.