June 1, 201015 yr Written for a pop punk rock band I plan on assembling one day. MIDI FILE written in Guitar Pro (the vocal part is substituted with Reed Organ)Thoughts?Lyrics:(0:05)You thought your fun was all overBut still I've got my eyes on you(0:17)To be honestI'd rather turn my shoulder(0:23)But you make breaking hearts look so cool(0:29)If love isn't such an issue(0:34)Then tell me what sets you freeI'd bet you the fools you've trampled through(0:45)Have nothing at all on me(0:55)Tell me you're not bothered'Cause everybody's calling you..(1:06)..HeartbreakerThat role you've played since high school(1:11)When you made breaking hearts look so cool(1:17)If your love is not what moves you(1:23)Then show me what sets you freeThe fools you've used and trampled through(1:34)Have nothing at all on me(1:48)I can't keep waitingYou shouldnt keep me waiting for so longWaiting on you(2:00)Your heart, it's changingI know it 'cause I feel it deep in youLike you feel it too(2:11)But my heart's still breakingAnd it's gonna keep on breaking because(2:18)You won't make your move..So make it soon(2:26)Maybe it's you that's so broken inAnd I can't help but believe(2:37)I can fix youAs soon as I figure you out(2:42)Oh, how you make breaking hearts look so cool(2:49)If love's just a bad joke to you(2:54)Then how can I set you free?Those fools you've abused and trampled through(3:05)Have nothing at all on me(3:13)On me.. oh.. Heartbreaker
June 2, 201015 yr Great job! I like the lyrics quite a bit! I can definitely picture a rock / pop band doing this! One suggestion to the track itself though is possibly work on the drum part a little more; make it 'drive' and 'groove'. It just seemed like it didn't really 'groove', but that may just being Guitar Pro's below average instrument sounds. xD Just a suggestion anyway! I can totally picture this grooving with a real good drummer though! Oh and I like the ending too! Good work!
