anabell lee.mp3

hey,

I'm new to the forum, and am almost finished these two interconnected compositions, I am just having trouble fixing the transitions, and the endings, and other stuff....

The first one, Christine, is for Cello and Piano, I am stuck at 2:11, in which I wanna change everything after and somehow return to the first theme, lol, and the second, Anabell lee "funeral march", is for violin and piano. They are based on similar melodies, but I tried using them in different methods, I am still planning on adding one more for viola and piano, but having trouble with just sketching that one, hehe. I would appreciate any form of feedback/criticism.

I only recently started composition, but have been improvising for about two years... I have no composition teacher yet, and would appreciate help of any kind. If anyone has the time to look at the sheet music for in detail criticism, I would be glad to provide it, and would be very gratefull!!

Thanks Alot!

christine.mp3

Finale 2009 - chrisucombined.pdf

Finale 2009 anabell.pdf

anabell lee.mp3

hey,

I'm new to the forum, and am almost finished these two interconnected compositions, I am just having trouble fixing the transitions, and the endings, and other stuff....

The first one, Christine, is for Cello and Piano, I am stuck at 2:11, in which I wanna change everything after and somehow return to the first theme, lol, and the second, Anabell lee "funeral march", is for violin and piano. They are based on similar melodies, but I tried using them in different methods, I am still planning on adding one more for viola and piano, but having trouble with just sketching that one, hehe. I would appreciate any form of feedback/criticism.

I only recently started composition, but have been improvising for about two years... I have no composition teacher yet, and would appreciate help of any kind. If anyone has the time to look at the sheet music for in detail criticism, I would be glad to provide it, and would be very gratefull!!

Thanks Alot!

I say since the violin and piano duet and the cello and piano duet are in the same key from what i hear that you should combine both the violin the cello and the piano and turn the two pieces into one trio. Maybe then you'll be able to work more with what you have and be happy with the final result.

I say since the violin and piano duet and the cello and piano duet are in the same key from what i hear that you should combine both the violin the cello and the piano and turn the two pieces into one trio. Maybe then you'll be able to work more with what you have and be happy with the final result.

hmm. lol thats a very good point! lol, Maybe I'll try and see what I can do then...a trio will be tougher to put together though, but I think its a pretty good idea! any criticism though, since in order to add the third voice, I probably need to complete these two instruments first. The thing is the last time I tried adding an extra voice, the piece I tried it on became too busy, and lost some of its....atmosphere?? although with computer sounds not much of an atmosphere... haha,