Ach bleib bei Herr Jesu Chrsit Koral Prelude & Koral

Hey,Please tell me what you think.Simenn

Ach bleib bei Herr Jesu Chrsit Koral Prelude & Koral

Very nice short piece, but nothing too adventurous. Why do you only seem to compose baroque music? Anyways, it looks like you learned your chorale voice leading well, only error I can spot are P8s in bar four between alto and bass. Oh, and that you mixed up T and A. It goes STAB... which is the word I usually think of when I have to do four part voice leading. Only other thing is that I thought the chorale went to vi a lot and the prelude didn't prepare me much for that - the prelude and chorale didn't match so much. Not that they're supposed to, but that was just a reaction I had.

James H. meant SATB I suppose... I'm not too familiar with baroque composition, but is it common practice that the prelude is longer than the actual koral?

Solid writing, but I have the same concern as royreintjes- the two movements feel unbalanced. When I hear the word prelude I automatically think that it is building to present something bigger. The length makes the koral feel like an anticlimactic postlude. However, I'm a big fan of boroque music and I liked the piece(s).