another lame piece! hehe

again with the mistakes. i had spent hours tiring to get all my compositions recrded and with this one, i really could not be arsed. so sorry for the mistakes but i dont really care :D as long as you enjoy it :D

another lame piece! hehe

If don't really care, how can you except us to care?

i don;t i am simply letting you know, so half way through you don't think, 'oh my what was that?!?'

last life is right. How can you expect us to critique your piece if you desensitize yourself by putting yourself down. As a musician, you should be proud of what you create, even if it's not 100%, because then what's the point for us to listen to it, and for you to read our comments. Do you just want us to say 'oh no, it's not terrible. it's a beautiful piece!' It just seems really pretentious.

On the side note, I actually enjoyed your piece. A bit repetitive use of harmonies but it has a very catchy tune and very reminiscent of Requiem for a Dream. Keep it up!

oh ok, ill take it out, thanks

im not putting myself down, i was just saying that i spent a while trying to get this one right because i hadn't played it in a while and i could not be bothered to record it again. aqnd with the name, i could think of a name so i called it lame because i don't liek it that much and i always use the work lame. this is a early piece and i thing that i have improved since i made this one.