4th movement Symphony No. 1

Hello,

Im posting here a movement of an unfinisehd symphony. I lost interest on this, so i post it to not keep it just for me an eternity in my hard drive. Maybe with your comments I could learn a lot. So coomments are welcome. Thanks!

P.D Im just uploading the Finale 2008 version.

4th8.MUS

Unfortunately, you have some plug-ins that won't play on my computer. I cannot hear your piece. Any chance you could save your piece as a midi and post that instead?

Peace on Earth,

-John

Hi John.

Here is the MIDI thanks for listenning!

4th8.mid

Nice panning, millyway.

Interesting ostinato at the very beginning. Nice build-up at 0:37. The volume at 1:19 was sounding a bit random.

You have an interesting mix of styles going on. There's a fair amount of video game music feel.

Your structure feels pretty good.

Nice switch at 2:43. The clarinet could be quieter after the harp. This feels like the quiet section.

I wish at 3:18 you changed the rhythm. It feels like we've been going at this constant pace and our ears deserve a chance to rest.

You have some interesting polyphony happening around 4:30.

I appreciate the switch at 5:00. It could have lasted a tad bit longer that section.

Another cool change around 6:00. This one lasted longer which was cool.

Nice piece, millway. My only concern is that you keep the intensity high throughout the piece and you only change it a couple of times. A few more sections that calm things down will do wonders.

-John

Thanks for your review John!