July 16, 201016 yr This is the first piece in a larger piano worked called "Discovering your emotions", written as a result of an emotional crisis.1. Regret2. Helplessness3. Relief4. Acceptance5. Passion6. Love Regret
July 16, 201016 yr I like your harmonies here with your melody: it sounds sort of like an elegy, except a bit more refined, and...reserved :hmmm: I think "Regret" is a good name for it: it's dark, but not too dark. There's a harshness about the rhythm and set-up that feels like grief and frustration. I think you achieved your goal very well :nod: Thank you for sharing, this was nice :happy: Is there any chance of a score? Pieces tend to get more reviews and comments if a score is present.
July 16, 201016 yr mmm, I understand Serge when he states that he likes your harmonies, but personally I am not so much in favour of the triplets you use, especially not in the beginning of the piece. Also ... the end gave me the impression that you had had the feeling of having written enough, hence we just stop. It is a good piece as an excercise in classical composing, your piece has little or nothing to do with its title, imo.Nevertheless good work.
July 16, 201016 yr Author Thank you for sharing your thoughts about the piece SergeOfArniVillage: I'm glad you liked it I compose using the piano roll but I think my dad cleaned up the exported notes for this piece, I'll upload the score if I can get them. WolfgangSachs Thanks for your criticism. You might be right that I felt like I was done and just stopped but I also didn't really want to make an elaborate end, more of a statement I guess. To me, the piece has everything to do with it's title, but you're of course entitled to your view. It's a little bit presumptuous of you to say something like that though
