July 18, 201015 yr Hello Naji, just listenend to your composition here. It is not quite clear to me what the "Etude" is for: staccato playiing, legato playing, From the point of composition: your piece is written in a-minor as it begins with a and ends with the chord of a (the lowest a in the right hand is to be played I pressume by the left hand, could you use when writing the piece a second layer, to make it clear?) Furthermore, I think that an augmented sixth or seventh could sound marvellous in your piece, instead of your use of an antique key (no augmented sixth or seventh). Structurally: What structure did you use? Perhaps you could rework it into an A - B - A structure, as it is I can find little or no structure in your composition. Yet... good attempt, keep on going WS
July 19, 201015 yr Author @ John, this was one of the first pieces I ever wrote (3 years ago). Extremely simple...
