June 11, 200619 yr I wrote this piece about a month ago. It took me about a day to write This is one of my first more orchestrated pieces. Just wondering if i should just stop here or go on to make more. Click on link Below to hear http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/6/10/600...The%20World.mp3
June 11, 200619 yr It's all right and about the right length for the material without having to develop something - maybe you could extend it another minute or so but beyond that it would tend to be film- or relaxing new age music for me. The trouble is, cathdreal-like arches of string sound tend to evoke thoughts of light beaming down rather than dark (for me). If you mean light beaming through the dark, fine. I noticed a sudden swathe of bass at about 1:57 that sounded slightly out of character. Maybe you could thin that down a bit? M
