Ahmet Duvarcı - A Big Smile from India

Here it is! Be the first viewers of my very first video clip. A flavor from the songs i wrote that i've been living through.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hZG8yf0kQR0&feature=related

Hope you enjoy. Thank you. A.

What I like best about your song is the percussion instrumentation - the tabla and sensitive use of finger cymbals is used really well with the bass. The lead to the vocal lines is very smooth (though the chime gliss is a little worn method but here it works as the vocal line is a bit different from usual Euro-Anglo vocals). The vocals have great potential - I love the slides of the line while using a more "Western" scale. Nevertheless, what you seem to lack is a clear form to the vocal line - it seems to just circle about a a tone or too and then make a big rise and back down and then repeated. Fine if part of a song but I think insufficient for what you have which could be about 30 - 60 secs longer.

I like your song a lot. And the video was excellent.

I assume you performed this yourself. You need to look at your intonation: there are times when you are not quite making the pitch. This is really common; and in non-professional productions, this sticks out more.

India is a wonderful place. Good luck with your career.

Very nice song,i like a lot the orchestration and the colour of your voice,good work!!!!