Créatures de la nuit mvt1

My 7th composition.

Créatures de la nuit mvt1

I liked it. It fells very Debussyian.

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Greetings.

I liked the harmonic change in 1:15. The opening was also nice, a sort of modal introduction. The rest was a bit too much of the same. I would shorten it a little, and add something new to contrast. Or change the accompaniment a bit. Vary. And a little more form and something beautiful could come of this

After about 30 seconds, I got bored with the dotted rhythm and the same harmony. In fact, I think you used the same harmony and dotted rhythm throughout the piece. This isn't ideal. Furthermore, the piano has 7 octaves + of a m3 worth of space to work with. Use it all! It will make your compositions better. The material is definetily nice you just need to do more with it. You can have a composition do the same thing with minute changes every once in a while. Unless this was designed to be a minimalist piece, which I don't think it was.

Good luck!