October 2, 201015 yr I don't rate, but would like to comment :) I don't like the strings attack phase. The way they play it all the time - try changing it depending on where in the phrase the notes are. The cymbal around 1:00 could be much more sparse yet still very effective. Pin point the most important of those rolls and leave the unimportant out. Fine typical arrangement and mix. Good to listen to :) In what way is this game/film music? Thomas
October 2, 201015 yr Author The strings started to annoy me during the making of the piece, but I ignored it, I was too lazy to make automations and change between strings types I finished it in like 1 hour or so. Game and film? Well I didn't know in which category it would fit better
October 5, 201015 yr Wow. I like this. A lot. I liked the build up sections, but the flute motif struck me as dull after the third time it was played. You do change it up rhythmically, but I think I didn't like the fact that it's louder than the other instruments. Mayhaps the other instruments should be a little louder? Oh whatever, I'm being really picky. Nice piece, it's fun and nice to listen to. Also, out of curiosity, what's performing the piece?
October 7, 201015 yr Wow, I really like the emotion in this piece. The strings could use some work. I love the fluttering! Great job. The anxiety and tension you build is great! Great job, keep up the good work! PS, I havent seen you around here much, so Ill say what everyone says: Be sure to comment on others work too :] Best, Jon
