October 7, 201015 yr A lovely melody easy to play with a tonality that perfectly fits to violin good sounding. Be careful in your accidentals notation
October 7, 201015 yr lol, who gave you one star? Maybe it was an accident. Anyways, you should know that we normally try not to upload more than two or three pieces in a day, that way everybody gets a chance to be seen. I thought that the piano was unnecessarily difficult at some parts. Also, you often let the right hand piano play the same thing as the violin, which I don't like. Just my opinions. And I was not the one who voted.
October 7, 201015 yr very lovely melody ! i love it , the piano line is awesome , and works as a solo piano! till the violin enters! im not an expert in tonality , but from what i hear , your harmony is very good .
October 10, 201015 yr Author A lovely melody easy to play with a tonality that perfectly fits to violin good sounding. Be careful in your accidentals notation Thanks!
October 10, 201015 yr Author lol, who gave you one star? Maybe it was an accident. Anyways, you should know that we normally try not to upload more than two or three pieces in a day, that way everybody gets a chance to be seen. I thought that the piano was unnecessarily difficult at some parts. Also, you often let the right hand piano play the same thing as the violin, which I don't like. Just my opinions. And I was not the one who voted. Thank you Ian!
October 10, 201015 yr Author very lovely melody ! i love it , the piano line is awesome , and works as a solo piano! till the violin enters! im not an expert in tonality , but from what i hear , your harmony is very good . I am glad you like it!
October 13, 201015 yr this was pretty nice :) Only thing I did not like was that I got the feeling you were trying your best very well to keep things interesting... to the extend of slightly exaggerating at times. Why all the runs, like m21-24, m71-78 etc?. I noticed you did this in the piano pieces as well. Another thing: wouldn't you've rather started the first 8 measures without the right hand octaves? It's twice the same figure (m1-8 and m9-16). The piano on its own (but even with the violin playing) is loud enough to play one note-voices and still to be heard well if you want it to do that. There were other things that I liked very much: m25-32 were pretty solid. I liked the piano and violin interplay in m33-34. Nice touch on the hairpin dynamics ( the: | > < | > < | ) in those two measures with the octaved triads in the piano part. Maybe you could try to space your staffs better at pages 3/6? Well done, this sounded very romantic.
October 18, 201015 yr I like this but I don't like it. I like it because it is very reminiscent of so many wonderful pieces for violin and piano/orchestra. That said, that's largely the reason I don't like this. You have definite talent here BUT... well, this isn't you. I think now you should strive for individuality... show us what YOU will do - not who you can imitate. That may seem harsh, but... with the talent you presented in this work.. it's the only step for you really. Grats.
