October 13, 201015 yr So, I've kinda had this playing around in my head for years.... Tried it with a rock style song... didn't like it.... eventually tried it with electronic style... thought it was better, I know its repetitive and the timings off on some of it.its because I have to use bomes mouse keyboard to record until I have enough money to get a midi to usb cable.... its called G and C because thats the original two chords that i used G and C
October 13, 201015 yr Yeah, I also have sometimes some ideas that might not be very good, but I have to write them or create something in order to get them out of my head. In the second half there is a strange hum or noise, is it intentional, I think it does not fit very well with the rest of elements.
October 13, 201015 yr The restart at :52 doesn't seem to sound right. I would recommend having a beat or something there so it doesn't enveloped. Same thing at 1:37 - you want to keep interest, those two sections really are drastic changes. Other than that, I like this little short.