With Each Passing Day the Wings of Fate Deepen

For My freind Samantha who I would so like to be with her right now..this is the first movment.

With Each Passing Day the Wings of Fate Deepen

As a first movement, is it finished, sounds unfinished to me,

i find curious you use of the strings, at the beginning you perhaps want a dark tone, yeah it may work but at m.35 i think it looks very unprofessional, Look the structure of the strings section has a purpose, your melody won't become weak if you don't use every single violin available, and the spread the harmony into the rest of strings, that violinI+II melody, viola 1 note, cellos 3 notes and high contrabasses, will sound like a chord in a piano with a very bad state keys, it won't be a well balanced sound, (also difficult to the cello players and conductor to balance), spread more the use of strings, no fear, its' fine, violins I are fine to play that line by themselves.

I could speak more about development but I will let you continue with this, i don't know what you have in mind already.

It is not finished and finalie messed with it I wil reupload it later. thank you for this all/