With Love from China

Imaginary storyline: He knows that he can't stay, and she knows that she can't go with him... The frame set of a sad scene in a romantic drama/thriller...

With Love from China

Very nice, I would, as a suggestion, take down the volume of the underlying piano in the later part of the piece.

very nice!!!! i really like the intro , i like the sounds that you used , what were you using?? . is there a score to your piece? if there is could you post it . the piece in general is very good , but i think you should change a bit in the rythem , as it gets a bit repetitive , overall great piece! keep it up .

btw if you want more comments make sure to comment on other people works too !

Hey Heath. Very well done! I would agree with the others in that it does seem to get a little repetitive after about 1:10, but I really think it's because of that piano ostinato that's carried throughout the entire song. I think if you were to just remove it at that point and let the other instruments carry more of our attention, it would be spot on. I enjoyed listening!