April 6, 201114 yr Hello! I haven;t seen you around the forums lately, so I'll take the opportunity to welcome you to YC :happy: . As for the music, I think the word for it is "unclear". That;s not necessarily a bad thing, but I felt that what you wanted to convey exactly wasn't very defined. Was there a main melody? What element did you want the listener to focus on? It might be the MIDI, but I felt that the music didn't carry much direction. It may also be because of the relatively short length of the piece. However, the harmonies were interesting enough, and the 3:2 poly-rhythm was very nicely used. There weren't any instrumental problems either. Just some odd kind of "bluriness". Depends on if you wanted it to sound that way :happy: .
