April 17, 201115 yr I made this sort of trailer/movie/game music. It's longer than it should be and a bit repetitive in the middle. Warrior
April 21, 201115 yr Neat stuff, Reverse. I think you can turn it up at the beginning. At your main section around 0:34, you could turn up the drums. There's one violin note that sounds like its an 8th or 16th late. It's the second note at the beginning of each violin phrase. If you want to keep that rhythm, make it sound a little bit more intentional. Yo, easy fix for repetitive middle section: transpose! Take it up a tone or semitone and add in a countermelody and this middle section will sound fresh. Alternatively, you could just cut out half of the middle part to keep it neat and concise. I like the length of it though. Cool piece, Reverse. It would work great for a movie trailer. -John
