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YAY! :DOk, so here is my composition. Why so many chords compared to the previous few? Well, I used the midi and finale software in my school (should I get finale btw?) and this is what I get :P I am thinking about deleting/taking off the previous few, 'cause they were just experiments. Haha :Dplease comment :) Oh, and I have been playing around with the idea of piano accompaniment recently as well. I will see what I get and haha :D (Oh no, thats not good...)Again, please comment :)

I'm not sure what I think of this. You start solidly in d minor then move at the end to f major. Not to bad, but, I didn't quite see the point in such a transition. Second, I think you should work a little more on the left hand bass parts. I would recommend adding some pianistic arpeggios to make it more idiomatic to the instrument. The runs of 16th note chords in the left hand, aren't difficult, but may drown out that melody in the right hand - you could octave it to make it better. I hope this critiques help some.

Ya it did Thanks