Minuet (Version 2)

I've reworked the piece in light of the suggestions/comments. What do you think of the changes?I'm treating this as a learning exercise, so if anyone is feeling generous with their time, a detailed analysis/critique would be most welcome! :)Changes from original version:1) Cadences edited.2) Simplified m21-22. It seemed a little too ornate and interrupted the flow.3) Reworked the harmony, bridges etc a bit. See especially: m13-24.4) Tempo increased from Quarter = 60 to Quarter = 68

I'm not at all an expert, so feel free to just ignore my comments :)

I think that at measure 7 there's something strange. It should be like a crescendo but the melody slowing down to triplets kind of contradicts the crescendo.

I think the development is really nice, and overall it sounds better than the first version.

Hey Nick! Thanks for the comment. Yeah - I'm a bit of two minds there. On the one hand, I do wonder if the change of rhythm interrupts the flow there. On the other, slowing down heightens the tension/crescendo. Hmm...