May 28, 201115 yr this is a very long song, mixing all kinds of musical instruments. I tried to take everything with a very full sound and constructed, something new to do, which is unusual. Burned Dream
June 1, 201115 yr I'm in it for the long haul, Nimrodia. Don't disappoint me. Nifty beginning. Pretty soft stuff at the beginning. Can you turn up the guitar at 1:10? It needs some help standing out. I think you should change chord progressions around 1:00 or 1:20. Repeating them too much can really wear a listener down. The instruments sound pretty good mixed together. Nice delay on the guitar at 3:15. Turn it up. Later on, it's accompanying the lead guitar, but for now, it's the most important thing in the world and it needs to be a bit louder. That synth or accordion at 4:20 sounds kind of Portaly. Neato. 3:15-6:10 could be shortened a bit. There's a fair amount of repetition that you could get rid of. I like how you bring it all together in the end. Neat track, Nimrodia! Try being a little more adventurous with your harmonies. It'll really liven up this track. -John
