Empire- Okrol's Theme

Hi,This is a the next track in the series from my 'Empire Overture', and is the theme of the main character to a book I'm writing.Once again, I made this a while back, but would love some feedback and support.

Hi,

Beautiful work!

I would like to hear a more human touch to the music. Sounds a bit too mechanical... Add some dynamics and expression in the lines...

Watch your low register... sounds a bit muddy at times.

Hope this helps. :)

Enjoyed!

Ss

Hi,

Beautiful work!

I would like to hear a more human touch to the music. Sounds a bit too mechanical... Add some dynamics and expression in the lines...

Watch your low register... sounds a bit muddy at times.

Hope this helps. :)

Enjoyed!

Ss

Thank you, my friend. You're the first person to comment.

Yes your points are very applicable, however, my music is played using virtual instruments, and they're not the best, so it is hard for me to create a human sounding sound.

Thanks again for the review.

-Phil

Hi,

Your work could be beautiful, but would even be more beautiful if there would be a score posted along to view the music heared

Kind regards

W.S.

Thank you, my friend. You're the first person to comment.

Yes your points are very applicable, however, my music is played using virtual instruments, and they're not the best, so it is hard for me to create a human sounding sound.

Thanks again for the review.

-Phil

Hi Phil,

I understand the instrument problem... if there "would be" a score - I'd score it a 3.2 out 5 stars. Not bad at all!

Ss

Hi Phil,

I understand the instrument problem... if there "would be" a score - I'd score it a 3.2 out 5 stars. Not bad at all!

Ss

Thank you, my friend. I will have to start uploading scores too, thanks again for the kind words.

-Phil

Hi,

Your work could be beautiful, but would even be more beautiful if there would be a score posted along to view the music heared <img src="http://network.youngcomposers.com/elgg/ipb/public/style_emoticons/default/smile.gif" alt=":)" />

Kind regards

W.S.

Thank you friend.

I will have to start uploading scores