June 9, 201115 yr Some Trailer type music, slow beginning, All of the protagonist's chances of redemption/revenge are gone and now he only has one last resort...etc.. Would love criticism and feedback, I think the strings at the beginning get a bit boring, so thing of changing those....also apologies for the abrupt ending EDIT: not sure why the drums are clipping, on itunes its playing fine, here it is on soundcloud, Last Resort
June 11, 201115 yr Welcome to YC, KralcA! Nice mix of styles in this piece. Oh no's! Yeah the drums are acting strange. Go back to your file, and check them out. Are they going above the 0 dB mark? Might want to turn them down or put a limiter on them. I think you could pan everything around a bit. Give every instrument its own space so that we can hear individual part. Strings are a little slow at the beginning. You could spruce them up with a trumpet or oboe or something. Or you could give the strings more of a melody line rather than just block chords for the whole beginning. Sounds cool KralcA! Fix the drums and try reuploading the file. That way, we won't be distracted by the drums. -John
