A ummm Ballad?

what do u think guys?

Good stuff man.

ummm I guess you could call it a ballad. Modulation is pretty good, from to d minor. If you want something more dramatic modulate to something like C sharp minor, or a relative major. That would be really impressive. You could even expand this cos its got a strong thematic line, like into a concerto or something.

Also because it has a principle recurring theme and contrasting phrases it could be classified as a "Rondo" for piano... In any case very fine piano writing you've got here. :D

I definately agree with Rob. This could be a second movement to a piano concerto. You could write a concerto like Khachaturian and use a selected theme throughout every movement. I would agree with Rob on the modulation. Take a chance and modulate into a more dramatic key. Hope this helps.

thnx :) i never thought about making this into a concerto ... but i always wanted to compose a concerto :)... ill keep this in mind thanx

Niels, I have to ask you to please write more about the pieces you put up. A lot of people are not going to want to download the piece without any information about it. There is a guideline for how to write about your piece, in the Rules thread, stickyed to the top of the Piano forum.

oh alright then... next time