July 30, 200619 yr I gotta saw on first listen... I think you could leave some space in some places for the piece to "breath" a little more. When I hear those opening secco chords I expected it to be more of a surreal effect as suggested by the piece's title. You seem really eager to state your first theme but you could be probably have drawn me in more if you had built into it. However, what I expected had nothing to do with your intentions so feel free to disregard.
