December 8, 20169 yr This is a track I was working on for a game. Its for a Jungle exploration area. Any feedback would be great!
December 8, 20169 yr 7/8 was an interesting choice here and I think it paid off. I think more emphasis on the bassline in the marimba(?) would be nice. The jump to the louder section was too abrupt if it's being used in a playable area. Throwing some custom dynamics processing couldn't hurt either... makes thing sound more progressive. Maybe a couple more chords could help too, but on the whole it was really quite nice.
December 8, 20169 yr Author Again thank you for the feedback! Im going to do some editing and change a few things and I will re-upload.
December 8, 20169 yr Much like your other work entitled "Dream" I can't help but feel like there is so much more that can be brought out here. The piece itself is absolutely terrefic but I was waiting for that high explosive and epic moment that will send me through the depths of the jungle. Nonetheless I really enjoyed this and it reminded me of the Lion King haha. The vocals in the background were perfect. Good work on this!
December 8, 20169 yr Author Awesome! Thank you Samurai...so basically Im missing the wow factor the climax of the piece...I think I can work on that. Thank you again for your comments!
December 8, 20169 yr Well I suppose it depends on what part of the game this going to fit into. Like if this is meant for an introduction trailer then a climax would be nice but if this is meant to be played and looped during player controlled gameplay then that's perfect as well.
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