July 30, 200620 yr I wrote this by hand (mostly) at a music camp I went to. I think I've finally turned into more of a Romantic style though that is a matter of opinion. CelloDuet.MUS
July 30, 200620 yr so what happens now? a fast section? I really like it so far. The cello has a beatiful sound up there, please make sure you write low stuff too.
August 1, 200620 yr I think I've finally turned into more of a Romantic style though that is a matter of opinion. Nooo!!! lol. :) Right now I actually kinda have to go to swim practice, but when I get back, I'll comment.
August 1, 200620 yr Very nice! I liked it. Very lyrical and Romantic. While listening to this I felt that this could be a slow movement of a suite perhaps. I wouldnt think you are considering this as a stand alone piece. It probably needs a bit more direction, and faster passages, and as Cmaj mentioned, lower notes. The thought of writing for two cellos are also good, lot of potential and lyricism in this instrument. I believe you can extend this music to a much bigger piece. It started off very good for sure.
August 1, 200620 yr So far, so good. I don't know what would make something Romantic, per say, so I won't answer that question. It was quite charming - the only thing I'd have to ask about is something the others already said - the range. The cello can have such lovey dark sounds on the lower strings. While I adore the tension produced by the higher strings I'd enjoy hearing some more variety in the sound in that sense. Is this a slow movement of a longer piece? I think somebody already asked that, but I'll ask too. I'd be interested in hearing a fast section to accompany this section. I'll keep an eye out if you post more!
August 1, 200620 yr I've been convinced that everyone here wants lower notes so I'll put some in the next section. I don't know what this is going to be as of yet but something with two cellos. I presented it to my cello teacher at a music camp and he thought it was nice. I don't know why but I've always liked high notes on the cello and that's probably why I didn't put any low notes in.
August 1, 200620 yr Hey, I don't blame you. I love the sound of the higher notes as well. I've been given the same criticism, actually! Goodie, there's going to be another section, then.
August 1, 200620 yr Here's an update with a new section (it starts at measure 38). It's faster and lower in the cello's range. CelloDuet.MUS
August 2, 200620 yr I liked the slow part better, but both are good. Slow part, very calming . . . Nice. Fast part, sounds a little messy.
August 3, 200620 yr What do you want us to do? Finish it for you? The allegro is so low I can barely hear it on the midi, but I really like the prelude. Very romantic. keep wiriting.