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Hello, this is my new song about Spring. I'm sorry if I'm late. :D I didn't have much time to write music these days. I hope, you'll like my new work, please write your opinion in comment! 

https://soundcloud.com/mardumusix/oliver-kovacs-spring-is-coming

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A major to E-flat major is a bit of a weird change. Your direct cadence to the G minor and VI chords can be awkward. Also your B-flat major to B minor in the second section. 
Overall it doesn't really sound like spring to me... the orchestration is fine for the most part (just be careful about brass power over string power)... more like an Elfman score. That's just my 2 cents though.

 

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On 2017. 03. 27. at 5:30 PM, Monarcheon said:

A major to E-flat major is a bit of a weird change. Your direct cadence to the G minor and VI chords can be awkward. Also your B-flat major to B minor in the second section. 
Overall it doesn't really sound like spring to me... the orchestration is fine for the most part (just be careful about brass power over string power)... more like an Elfman score. That's just my 2 cents though.

Thanks for your opinion Monarcheon! 

 

 

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