Abendmusic 0 Posted June 21, 2017 Share Posted June 21, 2017 (edited) Dear Community, I am relatively new to orchestration and therefor a beginner. I would like to share my latest soundtrack with you. I am grateful for any kind of feedback. Thanks for taking your time! Edited June 21, 2017 by Abendmusic Quote Link to post Share on other sites
ilv 124 Posted June 22, 2017 Share Posted June 22, 2017 This is a nice soundtrack. I would use less instruments and use less motion if you want it to sound like a forest whisper. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Monarcheon 587 Posted June 22, 2017 Share Posted June 22, 2017 Occasionally there were places like around 1:10 where you have a m9 or a P11 resolution to another chord tone already in the chord, which sounded a bit awkward only having one voice do it. I also do kind of agree it got a bit growly and "epic" (more, the genre) for a whisper as well. Sometimes the bass voicing was a little less cinematic to serve a more functional purpose, so there are costs and benefits to both. Cheers--- Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Abendmusic 0 Posted June 24, 2017 Author Share Posted June 24, 2017 Thank you a lot for your feedback! This helps me a lot. Cheers Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Juan José 3 Posted June 30, 2017 Share Posted June 30, 2017 (edited) Hello! I like the mood it produces. It seems more a "Forest Battle" than a "Forest Whisper" to me after 2:28, though. Good job! Another thing besides the composition itself is the mix. I don´t know if it is because the earplugs I´m using, but it sounds really distorted at some points. Consider subtractive EQ and Level Balancing before exporting. ;) Edited June 30, 2017 by Juan José Quote Link to post Share on other sites
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