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Hello everyone, this is the piece I newly composed, hope you like it.

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It is truly lovely..  The melody (and piano) moves along for a period with consistent note durations, and later, uses notes of varying length. Perhaps, a bit of note length variation earlier, might be something yout consider doing earlier .. Some half and whole notes, would let the listeners 'rest and catch his breath'..

The piano phrasing near the end of the piece, and the call/response of string and piano was totally excellent..  That totally got 'all my attention'..  The earlier section of piece, not as much, cause my brain, had already guessed how everything would continue,  and my mental focus started to wander..  But ending section,  I had to pay full attention and was  richly awarded for doing so..  

Very good. 

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