Palaman City - remastered

Hi there,

I wanted to share with you this french song that I wrote a few months ago and which was rematsrered by a friend of mine. 
To help you with the understanding, I added some subtitles that you need to start on youtube.
It's a love song about a man who wants to leave for a further town called "Palaman City" asking his girl to follow him.

I let you discover the song. Thank you all

Here are the lyrics translated:

You see it all starts and ends with music
With a delicate  walking
You get closer and lean, magnificent
With a sweet kiss everything shines
In an instant I give up
My skin is crawling, I'm attracted to you, magnetic

  You want me to follow you to Palaman city, Palaman city,Palaman city, oh
  That I kiss you in Palaman city, city,Palaman city,Palaman city, oh
  An artistic life in Palaman city,Palaman city,Palaman city, oh
  That I beep you in Palaman city,Palaman city,Palaman city,oh

You play and attract me in an acoustic world
I want to take advantage of your knowledge
And your volcanic mouth
Our bodies are getting closer, And melt, hypnotically
Your delicate fingers come, And show me how to do

  You want me to follow you to Palaman city, Palaman city,Palaman city, oh
  That I kiss you in Palaman city, city,Palaman city,Palaman city, oh
  An artistic life in Palaman city,Palaman city,Palaman city, oh
  That I beep you in Palaman city,Palaman city,Palaman city,oh

A no, you mess up and find me hysterical
We will no longer be for a lifetime,  You and me cheek to cheek
You leave but I stay in Paris, It's so chic
I told you it all starts and ends with music

That I kiss you, that I kiss you, that I beep you, that I leave you, oh
That I kiss you, that I kiss you, that I beep you, that I leave you, oh

  You want me to follow you to Palaman city, Palaman city,Palaman city, oh
  That I kiss you in Palaman city, city,Palaman city,Palaman city, oh
  An artistic life in Palaman city,Palaman city,Palaman city, oh
  That I beep you in Palaman city,Palaman city,Palaman city,oh

Wow. Magnifique!

This songs has everything for me.
Most of the times, pop music bores me, but this song keeps my attention.
The lyrics is very well-thought, yet easy to sing along. People often underestimate the creation process of good lyrics.
The accompaniment is nice too and I like the detail special effects; it adds an extra dimension.

Bon travail!

52 minutes ago, ilv said:

I can't find the music. Did you delete it?

 

Absolutely not it is sill at the same location : https://youtu.be/Cb3wZ1FSavs 

Tell me if it's ok this time ;-)

I liked it, i liked how the main melody is not as predictive as many things out there

Although i do think it gets a little repetitive near the end

I would like to see a bridge after the second chorus, but  that´s just my opinion

Hello. I quoted that some of you find this a little repetitive in the end. But I'm glad that you enjoyed the song and found it original. Thank you all for the listening. Cheers