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Ambivalent Love Song

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The #1 thing I notice is that the piano right hand plays the melody along with the strings, which really isn't necessary. This takes away from harmonic complexity. The only exception is if there is a specific musical effect you are trying to achieve by having right hand and strings playing the same notes. My second point is related to development. I find this piece to lack atmospheral changes. I wouldn't say repetitiveness is a problem, but more atmospherical development and variation would be greatly appreciated. If you are choosing to keep the atmosphere like this for a music reason, please let me know. There are some potentially awkward harmonies, but I can't tell if they're intentional or not. The ending sounded like it was cut off. This can be fixed by making the last note longer.

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