Donethur Posted September 8, 2017 Share Posted September 8, 2017 (edited) Pelase your feedback. Short theme inspired in folk music. thanks! https://soundcloud.com/donethur/theme-for-piano-4-dance Edited September 8, 2017 by Donethur Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monarcheon Posted September 9, 2017 Share Posted September 9, 2017 0:09 - bizarre resolution with the VI vs. i harmonic rhythm, along a weird melody. 0:49 - normally V chords don't use 11's. Same problems in the G minor section. Ending is weak, especially after a polyrhythmic crescendo. Generally good, with interesting consistency in both hands. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donethur Posted September 10, 2017 Author Share Posted September 10, 2017 (edited) Thanks for the feedback. Ilv: it is thanks to your feedback actually (and Monarcheon), I tried to do most of what you recommended. BTW I just ended this one, hope you like it :) Edited September 10, 2017 by Donethur Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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