Theme for piano 4 (dance)

Pelase your feedback. Short theme inspired in folk music.

thanks!

https://soundcloud.com/donethur/theme-for-piano-4-dance

Edited September 8, 20178 yr by Donethur

0:09 - bizarre resolution with the VI vs. i harmonic rhythm, along a weird melody.
0:49 - normally V chords don't use 11's.
Same problems in the G minor section.
Ending is weak, especially after a polyrhythmic crescendo.
Generally good, with interesting consistency in both hands.

Thanks for the feedback.

Ilv: it is thanks to your feedback actually (and Monarcheon), I tried to do most of what you recommended.

BTW I just ended this one, hope you like it :)

Edited September 10, 20178 yr by Donethur