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Another piece written for nothing in particular, the mixing is not up to scratch as usual, however, feedback welcome as always. 

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The intro was too long. Also, don't leave leading tones unresolved. The use of nonharmonic tones was sometimes awkward. There should be no prominent Bbs or B-naturals during a IV chord in C minor. Also, there could be more rhythmic development in the melody, unless you intend it for use as background music. It would also be nice if the strings ended with the piano simultaneously..

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32 minutes ago, ilv said:

The intro was too long. Also, don't leave leading tones unresolved. The use of nonharmonic tones was sometimes awkward. There should be no prominent Bbs or B-naturals during a IV chord in C minor. Also, there could be more rhythmic development in the melody, unless you intend it for use as background music. It would also be nice if the strings ended with the piano simultaneously..

 

I did think the intro was a bit long, or at least not enough change during it. Could you be more specific with timings for the unresolved leading tones? I wasn’t sure about the ending, 1st I had just the piano, then the strings right to the end and when I tried cutting them short by fading out on the penultimate chord I really liked the sound. Thanks for the feedback by the way, it’s always very helpful.  

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