October 17, 20178 yr Hi, This is one of my compositions. Revive promo tune.mp3 It would mean a great deal to me if I could get some feedback. Feel free to share your opinions with me.
October 18, 20178 yr Nice! I hear some promise in here. The sounds you're using are nice and fairly well balanced. Your changes and "impact" moments are well spaced and have the right idea, but feel a little underwhelming to me in terms of progression. It feels like I want a bigger difference from what I'm hearing before the transition to what I'm hearing after the transition. Not sure if I want more of a dynamic difference or compositional difference, but that's what my ear tells me. Good sounds, well thought out, but a little reserved. Keep it up :) Gustav Johnson
October 18, 20178 yr Author 3 hours ago, Gustav Johnson said: Nice! I hear some promise in here. The sounds you're using are nice and fairly well balanced. Your changes and "impact" moments are well spaced and have the right idea, but feel a little underwhelming to me in terms of progression. It feels like I want a bigger difference from what I'm hearing before the transition to what I'm hearing after the transition. Not sure if I want more of a dynamic difference or compositional difference, but that's what my ear tells me. Good sounds, well thought out, but a little reserved. Keep it up :) Gustav Johnson Thank you Gustav Johnson!
October 18, 20178 yr Author 8 minutes ago, ilv said: It's way too short, but good opening motive! Thank you ilv!
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