Symphony No.1 in D major I. Doloroso e lento

My first attempt at a symphonic styled composition. I am 16 in yr 11 in Australia.

Please give me feedback on what I need to improve on and tips on what Symphony No.1 in D major - I. Doloroso e lento.pdfI should build to next

Also cause I went from Sibelius 7.5 to Garageband there is no Timpani, so it's a Vibraphone

Edited October 31, 20178 yr by Liam Doyle

Hmmm. I can’t really hear anything..

What do you mean?

Nothing is playing 

The only thing I hear wrong with it was the first cymbal crash, it kind of came out of nowhere. Overall, I really liked this. Good work!

6 hours ago, Axelroxasxion3582 said:

Nothing is playing 

 

RIP