piano piece "la Arboleda" Op.11 No.7

comments welcome

La_Arboleda.pdf

Do you think you could post a midi? I really don't feel like playing it. Or putting it into finale, which I would absolutely not do. The playing thing I might do...but that would only be if was exceedingly bored.

:) here the midi file and PDF of "La Arboleda" piano piece Op.11 No.7

la_arboleda.MID

La_Arboleda.pdf

I think it is a bit heavy all in all. Of course it mostly because of the midi - but be a little more gentle with the repeated chords, I would sugest you spend more time with the midi - make the beginning of each measure accented and the chords more stacato like(shorter). BAM-bam-bam-BAM-bam-bam, It's a dance right??? You have written it in 6/4 but wouldn't 3/4 be more natural?

And I would even suggest a slight increase in tempo.

I think you know what I'm talking about, but of course you ment people to play it for themselves - but in any case, do consider that people have to listen to it in midi which is horrible, so you can at least ease their pain a little :)

One last thing - the melody line is good, but a few ornaments would do wonders. Would also make it less heavy.

I think you did a good job, but as stated, there are still some things to work with. Have fun!