Christian "Cj" Rhen Posted December 21, 2017 Share Posted December 21, 2017 I am sorry the text is all the way down here, please listen to my music if any of you would like to, please email me cjrhenhome@gmail.com, send me some of your songs, share some of mine, sibscribe to me if you like. I am going to start putting out lots more content. I am a trumpet and sax player and will begin doing more of that. Also you can hear my ideas and some horn playing at instagram, wind_player1. Thank You, I would love to work with any of you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishyfry Posted December 21, 2017 Share Posted December 21, 2017 Hi Christian. I listened to Blaze, and enjoyed it. You've done a good job writing a piece that has a fun feel to it, and there's a nice contrast between very jubilant moments and slightly darker material. There was a sour note at around 0:41 that I found really jarring, and I think it really throws off the voice leading in the little brass chorale thing there. Also, I probably would have continued the 16th note lines in the flute, clarinets, and saxes at 3:40 rather than having them play 8ths with the rest of the band, in order to avoid losing forward momentum going into the next phrase. Otherwise, I don't have any suggestions. Cheers, and welcome to the community! I may listen to Perseverance later and share my thoughts, if I have any. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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