Seraphus - Icarus

Hello everyone,

here is my new song, I would love to get some feedback on it.

Thanks and happy holidays to everyone :).

Seraphus - Icarus

Very serene. I really like it.
There was a spot in the first couple phrases where the atmosphere of the piece changed due to your rhythm section. I would try to use that effect more often.
When the first vocal part came in, the pedal i chord in your strings clouded the previously nicely swayed feeling of the chords from before. Maybe change the voices one by one to avoid this.
I think all of your periods started with an F minor chord... it was a nice home key, but if, for example, you started on a VI∆7 chord, even once, it could really be a wonderful contrast.
Best wishes.

Thank you once again for the great insight :).